Long Cold Winter

Below is a new idea I have for a song. I welcome any feedback.
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Song Idea: Long Cold Winter
Blues song - Think Audio Slave

[Verse 1]
It's cool and its rainy this late summer morning
and I am watching the rain as it falls from the sky
I can't seem to shake all the tired and ache
and I just keep on rubbing my eyes

[Verse 2]
The sky has been dark so much lately
Oh the seasons they're trying to change
And my thoughts drift away to last winter
And I don't think I'm ready to take it

[Chorus]
Oh the winter was so long this year
Oh the cold chilled me to the bone
The sky was so dark, and so was my heart
And you left me feeling alone

[Verse 3]
Well the grass is still green in the court yard
But some leaves on the trees start to fall
I can't quite seem to remember what happened
I guess I just walked away from it all

[Chorus]
Oh the winter was so long this year
Oh the cold chilled me to the bone
The sky was so dark, and so was my heart
And you left me feeling alone

[Bridge]
Oh why, Does my heart still feel like it died
last winter was so long and cold
I don't think I can take another winter like that
because my heart still feels all alone

[Instrumental Verse] (guitar solo)

[Chorus]
Oh the winter was so long this year
Oh the cold chilled me to the bone
The sky was so dark, and so was my heart
And you left me feeling alone